國中段考作文從四級分到六級分的距離

拿到考卷的那一刻,我徹底不敢相信,眼前也同時閃耀著勝利光彩!飽滿的「6」字也有如田裡豐收的稻穗,襯托出兩個月的努力後所得到的成就感。
暑假時,國文老師拿著試卷袋走進教室時,讓迫不及待的我雀躍不已地跑到老師面前詢問這一次的成績。不料,老師口中的四級分,卻像在賞我巴掌,把我原本的期待隨著不斷流下的眼淚流走。但是,我並不想屈就於四級分,因此我決定拿著一張四級分失敗品,到了Amazingtalker平台找作文老師,希望可以從中理解自己的盲點並慢慢進步。後來,在尋遍平台的「中文」區好幾次後,我找到了Jason老師,也成為我能夠反轉退步局勢的轉捩點。
在第一堂課時,我茫然的接觸到我從來沒聽過的作文公式,之後漸漸的熟悉了。當我寫段考作文題目時,我想到了上課時Jason老師所教的方法,到了後面靈感乍現,最後竟然得到六級分!各個迅速的進步過程,都讓人感到訝異!後來,在我自己奮勉不懈的努力下,在一次學校的作文比賽中,我意外的擠進了狹窄的排行榜!這種喜事,雖然我自己的努力占了大部分,但如果沒有老師幫我點亮我寫作的靈感,我在考試和比賽中的表現可能和現實完全相反。
在老師的春風化雨下,我從原本寫作的普通過渡到不平凡,從原本對作文的沒興趣轉化成喜愛,更從原本在比賽中的失敗者升級為成功者!因為老師讓我造就不凡,因此我真的太感謝老師了!

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👍American Ivy League Teacher (TOCFL, HSK)
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EnglishC1 Advanced
ChineseNative
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✨Teacher with a scholarship in a prestigious New Ivy League school in the United States, and a Chinese interviewer at a U.S. university ✨Published papers in Taiwan Chinese Literature Association ✨Current elementary school teacher and university Chinese lecturer, 20 years of Chinese teaching qualifications, teaching experience in simplified and traditional characters, students from all over the world, the target is from professors, doctors, managers to five-year-old children, etc., completely customized teaching. ✨Multiple teaching methods, lively and interesting in class, never boring ✨Specialty: Hong Kong-style pronunciation correction class, classic literature class, children's picture book class, elementary and middle school composition class, and adult HSK and TOCFL exams.
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